Contents Page Sixth Edit

I added page numbers underneath my images in order to make the contents page clearer and easier to read as well as to be more conventional.

Magazine Cover Sixth Edit

I added more text to the cover in order to make the cover look more conventional while eluding readers to the content that can be found inside of the magazine. I also deleted the bottom bar as I felt in did not meet conventions and provided little use.

Double Page Fifth Edit

Having completely gone over my feedback in it's entirety I have spent the past two days taking photographs to replace the precious image and completely change the layout of the double page spread. I feel this clear look (which does combine some of the stylistic features of the previous look to the spread) looks far more conventional and adheres to the feed I received from my target audience. I changed the photograph to one that was brighter and more vibrant. Acting on my feedback I also changed the layout and the font in order to be more conventional. From the analysis of existing music magazines I came to the decision of embedding quotes which I have also added.