Target Audience Feedback: Contents and Double Page

From this feedback I have decided to change change the pink font used in the contents and change the image I used in the double page spread as it is too blurry.

Target Audience Feedback: Cover

Again using this feedback I have decided to change the bubble font, the close-up image and add a bar code and price.

Teacher Feedback

From this feedback I have decided to add more stories to my front cover add add a ticker to the bottom of the front cover with band plugs.
I have decided to sharpen the image on the contents page and change the page number fonts on my contents page.
I have decided to change the layout of my double page spread, change the font used on my double page spread and change the layout of the text boxes.

Rough Cut Feedback: Student Feedback

Using this feedback I have decided to add a bar code, add more stories and add a price to my front cover.
I have decided to change the layout of my contents page and edit the pictures on my contents page.
I have decided to change the layout, the pictures and the fonts used on my double page spread.

Double Page Rough Cut

In my rough cut hand in I have added a drop capital to make the spread more conventional and changed the layout of the text so that it flows better.

Contents Page Rough Cut

I have completed the rough cut stage of the magazine project and have added more images to the magazine and page numbers/titles underneath these images in order to appear more conventional to the alternative music magazine genre.

Magazine Cover Rough Cut

I have finished the rough cut stage of the magazine project and  added more links to articles (using a printed style, bold, jagged font) to adhere to the general conventions of music magazines. I also added a FREE! Sticker in order to gage the reader’s attention and make the reader feel as if they are getting more for their money.